I have been revising my paper to include more details of specific scenes, as mentioned in my peer review. They seem to think that it would benefit the emotion of my thesis. I can appreciate that. I also came across the suggestion of strengthening my conclusion. Sometimes ending in a grand way can be difficult and I find myself spending more time on concluding than anywhere else.
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Conclusions can be hard! At the very least, you can simply restate what you've already said and then leave us with something bigger to think about. That usually works just fine. No need to aim to be extra "grand!"
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